Thursday, November 3, 2011

apparent

this piece of glass
once helped shape water
the favor
reciprocated

4 comments:

  1. Kay, I like the theme explored in the poem, but I'm not sure if you need a stanza break.

    Just a thought.

    Chen-ou

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  2. Hi Chen-ou,

    It was an accident, and I decided to leave it. Curiosity and laziness rolled into one. :)

    Thanks for the thought; I truly appreciate it. I think I'll unbreak it now. :)~

    ~Auntie Kay

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  3. Another to carry in one's pocket and rub between the fingers throughout one's day. A lovely, evocative quatrain, Kay.

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  4. Brian, that's exactly what I do with sea glass. I'm so happy that this is a poem you will carry with you for a bit.

    ~Kay

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