Kay, I like the theme explored in the poem, but I'm not sure if you need a stanza break.Just a thought.Chen-ou
Hi Chen-ou,It was an accident, and I decided to leave it. Curiosity and laziness rolled into one. :) Thanks for the thought; I truly appreciate it. I think I'll unbreak it now. :)~~Auntie Kay
Another to carry in one's pocket and rub between the fingers throughout one's day. A lovely, evocative quatrain, Kay.
Brian, that's exactly what I do with sea glass. I'm so happy that this is a poem you will carry with you for a bit.~Kay
Kay, I like the theme explored in the poem, but I'm not sure if you need a stanza break.
ReplyDeleteJust a thought.
Chen-ou
Hi Chen-ou,
ReplyDeleteIt was an accident, and I decided to leave it. Curiosity and laziness rolled into one. :)
Thanks for the thought; I truly appreciate it. I think I'll unbreak it now. :)~
~Auntie Kay
Another to carry in one's pocket and rub between the fingers throughout one's day. A lovely, evocative quatrain, Kay.
ReplyDeleteBrian, that's exactly what I do with sea glass. I'm so happy that this is a poem you will carry with you for a bit.
ReplyDelete~Kay