You've surpassed yourself in mastery of the form here, the progression and imagery perfect, the poem a pleasure. But then a witchy poet "twelve-fingerd, our of mind"... would be most powerful and on intimate terms with these things this time of year. ; )
You've surpassed yourself in mastery of the form here, the progression and imagery perfect, the poem a pleasure. But then a witchy poet "twelve-fingerd, our of mind"... would be most powerful and on intimate terms with these things this time of year. ; )
ReplyDeleteAh, Brian, our dear Annie. I like the typo, "our of mind" rather than "out of mind." :) I have been her kind... "rearranging the disaligned."
ReplyDeleteLove her!
I have *Transformations*; I still need to get her collection.
~Kay
Kay, I think this is the first reverse cinquain I've ever read. Great visual details. I like the concluding line.
ReplyDeleteChen-ou
Thank you, Chen-ou. ;)
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