tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post7354856688576256346..comments2023-05-23T06:27:45.215-07:00Comments on Immersed in Word: The Great PumpkinKay Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-40333943604099340322011-10-26T20:29:00.086-07:002011-10-26T20:29:00.086-07:00Thank you, Chen-ou. ;)Thank you, Chen-ou. ;)Kay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-11752229094148614032011-10-26T18:08:05.189-07:002011-10-26T18:08:05.189-07:00Kay, I think this is the first reverse cinquain I&...Kay, I think this is the first reverse cinquain I've ever read. Great visual details. I like the concluding line.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-48065565837232262122011-10-26T15:05:31.945-07:002011-10-26T15:05:31.945-07:00Ah, Brian, our dear Annie. I like the typo, "...Ah, Brian, our dear Annie. I like the typo, "our of mind" rather than "out of mind." :) I have been her kind... "rearranging the disaligned." <br /><br />Love her!<br /><br />I have *Transformations*; I still need to get her collection.<br />~KayKay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-1313074370161387262011-10-26T08:28:40.095-07:002011-10-26T08:28:40.095-07:00You've surpassed yourself in mastery of the fo...You've surpassed yourself in mastery of the form here, the progression and imagery perfect, the poem a pleasure. But then a witchy poet <i>"twelve-fingerd, our of mind"...</i> would be most powerful and on intimate terms with these things this time of year. ; )Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12945352610103167449noreply@blogger.com