Tuesday, October 25, 2011

full circle

it is
moon's turn to take
special effects to new
horizons, moaning horror at
earth's tremulous vision
imploding dark--


  1. How did I miss this piece of "superb-ity"?! (I know, but it really SHOULD be a word, don't you think? ; )

    I have seen and heard this terrible moon and wondered why so few poets have spoken of it. Obviously it was for you to speak and rein-in via strict form.

  2. I'm so glad you like it, Brian. I was thinking I had missed the mark somewhere with this one.

    It's been fun writing a poem a day again... I was pondering National Novel Writing Month, but I just don't know if I have it in me. Too much going on. The short little ditties of poetry seem more realistic... (That's a laugh after this week's poetry! What is real anyway? I've gotten really introspective lately, and it drives me crazy!)