Sunday, March 27, 2011

whose fault

is it?
advancing lines
soldiers of the earth's crust
urging the globe to shrink and spin
faster

3 comments:

  1. Intriguing and creative metaphors, Kay. Talk about your integral titles!

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  2. I thought you'd like that. I hope my poetic skills improve in April. I plan to take the NaPoWrMo challenge again. I've "faultered" lately with my writing. LOL.

    I am currently reading Allen Ginsberg's Deliberate Prose, and Gary Snyder was referred to in the Oregonian. I believe it is time for a look at the Beat Poets.

    I love being out of school! ~Kay

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  3. Kay,

    A thought-evoking poem!

    The title is effectively utilized.

    Nicely done.

    Chen-ou

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