Intriguing and creative metaphors, Kay. Talk about your integral titles!
I thought you'd like that. I hope my poetic skills improve in April. I plan to take the NaPoWrMo challenge again. I've "faultered" lately with my writing. LOL.I am currently reading Allen Ginsberg's Deliberate Prose, and Gary Snyder was referred to in the Oregonian. I believe it is time for a look at the Beat Poets.I love being out of school! ~Kay
Kay,A thought-evoking poem!The title is effectively utilized.Nicely done.Chen-ou