the sea spills from my mind
less rhetorical, more metaphorical
lees of the ship that sailed
she returns to her port
ending embargo, unloading cargo
See! spills from my mind
less rhetorical, more metaphorical
lees of the ship that sailed
she returns to her port
ending embargo, unloading cargo
See! spills from my mind
Wonderful poem! Such control of content and form here. Beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteKay, Your use of repetition is effective, making the reader pay close attention to what happens between the opening and closing lines.
ReplyDeleteChen-ou
I sail that See! quite often :)
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