tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post5093703358152638348..comments2023-05-23T06:27:45.215-07:00Comments on Immersed in Word: OverflowingKay Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-63874614308447508672011-01-08T10:31:02.722-08:002011-01-08T10:31:02.722-08:00I sail that See! quite often :)I sail that See! quite often :)Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-76564389751758839652011-01-08T08:01:15.347-08:002011-01-08T08:01:15.347-08:00Kay, Your use of repetition is effective, making t...Kay, Your use of repetition is effective, making the reader pay close attention to what happens between the opening and closing lines.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-73867201314071005512011-01-08T07:52:10.273-08:002011-01-08T07:52:10.273-08:00Wonderful poem! Such control of content and form h...Wonderful poem! Such control of content and form here. Beautifully done.Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12945352610103167449noreply@blogger.com