Kay, the title is effectively utilized as the opening line. And the implied contrast (still vs move) is powerful.Share with you:Time is the school in which we are educatedAll the best,Chen-ou
A sense of security and anxiety counterpoised here. The success of the poem hinges on an interesting maneuver involving word choice & placement. Works for me.
Kay, the title is effectively utilized as the opening line. And the implied contrast (still vs move) is powerful.
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Time is the school in which we are educated
All the best,
Chen-ou
A sense of security and anxiety counterpoised here. The success of the poem hinges on an interesting maneuver involving word choice & placement. Works for me.
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