The title is thought-provoking. In fact, it's an interesting subject of an emerging academic discipline, "memory Work." (By the way, if you've finished your studies, I recommend you read Günter Grass' Crabwalk, a marvelous novel on this subject.A good fusion of scene and emotion. The visual details makes the poem emotionally effective.I like this poem very much.Chen-ou
Chen-ou, your generous words have lightened my day. Thank you.~Kay
I second Chen-ou. I really don't know anybody who does cinquain better than you, Kay. And you know how much I love the form.