Your skillful use of consonance makes the poem effective.
I like your personified poem, especially the concluding stanza.
Matt's photo is stunning. The almost invisible eyes of the craw makes the photo haunting.
By the way,
Have you written haiga? If not, check out Daily Haiga (http://www.dailyhaiga.org/). This new form of Japanese short poetry could be a golden opportunity for you two to deepen spousal relationship.
Thank you Chen-ou. I think your link on haiga will be interesting to check out. :)
The crows on the light driftwood were fascinating. I usually pay attention to the gulls and pelicans, but these dark fellows caught my eyes this time...
Kay,
ReplyDeleteYour skillful use of consonance makes the poem effective.
I like your personified poem, especially the concluding stanza.
Matt's photo is stunning. The almost invisible eyes of the craw makes the photo haunting.
By the way,
Have you written haiga? If not, check out Daily Haiga (http://www.dailyhaiga.org/). This new form of Japanese short poetry could be a golden opportunity for you two to deepen spousal relationship.
Chen-ou
Thank you Chen-ou. I think your link on haiga will be interesting to check out. :)
ReplyDeleteThe crows on the light driftwood were fascinating. I usually pay attention to the gulls and pelicans, but these dark fellows caught my eyes this time...
~Kay