Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Creation

into the fire
the glass is thrown
molten image of earth's
core
sand, glass
earth again, the tide
recycles them all
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5 comments:

  1. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐September 14, 2010 at 10:57 AM

    Creation sounds like re-creation.

    Your use of repetition is effective.

    Chen-ou

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  2. BrianSeptember 14, 2010 at 4:49 PM

    I like how you've structured this visually, Kay.

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  3. Kay TracySeptember 14, 2010 at 5:49 PM

    Thanks, Brian. I was purposeful with "core," but I didn't catch the circular form. Lucky this time.
    ~Kay

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  4. Kay TracySeptember 15, 2010 at 10:01 PM

    Dear, dear Chen-ou,

    I failed to acknowledge your response on this one. I'm so sorry. I appreciate the time you take to read and comment on my writing!

    Schedule changes are no excuse for negligence.

    My humble apologies, and thanks! ~Kay

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  5. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐September 16, 2010 at 8:41 AM

    Kay,

    No apologies needed. Thanks for the the enjoyment of reading your poems.

    Best,

    Chen-ou

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