Creation sounds like re-creation.Your use of repetition is effective.Chen-ou
I like how you've structured this visually, Kay.
Thanks, Brian. I was purposeful with "core," but I didn't catch the circular form. Lucky this time.~Kay
Dear, dear Chen-ou,I failed to acknowledge your response on this one. I'm so sorry. I appreciate the time you take to read and comment on my writing!Schedule changes are no excuse for negligence.My humble apologies, and thanks! ~Kay
Kay,No apologies needed. Thanks for the the enjoyment of reading your poems.Best,Chen-ou