Saturday, August 14, 2010

A Firm Handshake

rocking
ageless rhythm
one head, yes, one head, no
hands entwining perfectly still
agree

4 comments:

  1. Very tender, Kay, your use of the form completely unobtrusive.

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  2. Thank you, Brian. You know, I can change "his" and "her" to "one" and "one."

    I think I will.
    ~Kay

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  3. Kay, the change to pronouns will be good.

    Yes, you're really good at writing cinquains.

    Chen-ou

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  4. Thank you, Chen-ou. I truly admire your abilities with Tanka, Haiku, and Gogyohka. Actually, you are deft in many forms. :o)

    Enjoy your weekend. It's hot, hot, hot here!

    ~Kay

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