Very tender, Kay, your use of the form completely unobtrusive.
Thank you, Brian. You know, I can change "his" and "her" to "one" and "one."I think I will.~Kay
Kay, the change to pronouns will be good.Yes, you're really good at writing cinquains.Chen-ou
Thank you, Chen-ou. I truly admire your abilities with Tanka, Haiku, and Gogyohka. Actually, you are deft in many forms. :o)Enjoy your weekend. It's hot, hot, hot here!~Kay