Saturday, April 21, 2012

Unforgettable

she was
afraid to be
alone, she sensed the end
I tried to be there, but she was
alone

4 comments:

  1. A heartbreaking and beautifully crafted poem. The variant emphasis of line adds a depth and dimension only a true word-smith could effect.

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  2. Thanks so much, Brian.

    Always,
    Kay

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  3. Kay;
    I hope you never feel that way when I am around. I will always be here for you. Luv ya!
    matt

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  4. Dearest Matt, I never feel alone with you in my life. I am most alive when I'm with you. :)

    Thanks for loving me,
    Kay

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