Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Solstice Comes

snowflakes fall
lash to cheek
eyelids deny
the transition

3 comments:

  1. Kay,

    Lovely poem. I like it.

    Here is my response haiku

    solstice...
    counting snowflakes
    on my window

    Chen-ou

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  2. Oh, thank you Chen-ou! I love it when you write a response poem. This one is very lovely.

    Now, can you send some snow out my way??

    Merry Christmas, friend,
    Kay

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  3. Kay,

    The following is my snowflake monostich

    gathered in your hands snowflakes of my thousand words

    Merry Christmas!!

    Chen-ou

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