Saturday, December 3, 2011

In the Vicinity of Nativity

loose strands of hay
alight on heads
soon taxed by Caesar Augustus

4 comments:

  1. Well, somebody's gotta pay for it. ; )

    They think Caesar is bad, wait til they come to the attention of Herod...

    This form really does work for the short poem, Kay. Perfect pitch and finish, like a fine wine.

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  2. Thanks, Brian. I'm having fun with it. Cinquains aren't behaving lately! :)

    Here's something you all may be interested in. "The Collaborative Photo-Haiku Project" is archived by Tiff Holmes. I found it on Twitter. It'll be fun to play sometimes... I'm in this one.
    http://tifholmesphotography.com/cphp/2011/12/december-2011-series-entry-2/

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  3. Render unto Caesar the things which are Caesar's, and unto God the things that are God's.

    Kay, L3 gives me a chuckle.

    Chen-ou

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  4. Chen-ou, I'm glad to make you smile. :)

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