The plaintive simplicity of this one makes it all the more heart-breaking: "Why hast thou forsaken me?"
Brian, Thank you for being my friend. :)
The structural imbalance between the two parts of the poem works emotionally effective.Kay, nicely done.Chen-ou
Many thanks for your kind words, Chen-ou.
The plaintive simplicity of this one makes it all the more heart-breaking: "Why hast thou forsaken me?"
ReplyDeleteBrian, Thank you for being my friend. :)
ReplyDeleteThe structural imbalance between the two parts of the poem works emotionally effective.
ReplyDeleteKay, nicely done.
Chen-ou
Many thanks for your kind words, Chen-ou.
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