Thursday, October 27, 2011

the alarm

disorderly dreamscapes:
the air, swirling leaf bits
dead red spirits pour
pale amber ales
dust devils thrive and throng
witches prong
the black cat
yowling in my ear

3 comments:

  1. Absolutely incantatory - song & spell. I love it.

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  2. Thanks. I like your new word:
    SUPERBITY. Very witty ditty! Hee hee. :)

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  3. I second Brian. And the contrast of colors works effectively.

    Chen-ou

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