This moved me so deeply my eyes stung waiting here in the breakfast room for friends. That I am looking out on granite mountains also "shape suspended motion...set still, reflecting beauty", causes your poem to speak with special poignancy to me in the moment.
A beautiful metaphor to take into the future, Kay.
Brian, your comments moved me. How appropriate to see a mountain in this poem! Thank you for that shared vision of Rioja. I hope you are fully enjoying your trip.
Chen-ou, thank you for reading and commenting. I've missed you both!
This moved me so deeply my eyes stung waiting here in the breakfast room for friends. That I am looking out on granite mountains also "shape suspended motion...set still, reflecting beauty", causes your poem to speak with special poignancy to me in the moment.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful metaphor to take into the future, Kay.
From Rioja,
Brian
Kay, effective use of alliteration.
ReplyDeleteNicely done.
Chen-ou
Brian, your comments moved me. How appropriate to see a mountain in this poem! Thank you for that shared vision of Rioja. I hope you are fully enjoying your trip.
ReplyDeleteChen-ou, thank you for reading and commenting. I've missed you both!
Always,
Kay