the flowers in this bed
are rooted in perennial annals
and quilting bees
fading floral fragrance
within cotton sheets
lie dreams of spring
are rooted in perennial annals
and quilting bees
fading floral fragrance
within cotton sheets
lie dreams of spring
The sentiment is well conveyed through a good choice of words and images.
ReplyDeleteKay, is this poem intended to be untitled? I think a good title will make it great.
Just a thought.
Chen-ou
Thanks, Chen-ou.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you like it. This began as two poems, and then they fit together so well. I just haven't thought of any good titles yet. That's odd for me, because many times the title begins the poem for me!
I'm sure it will come, eventually!
~Kay
Kay, the title works well.
ReplyDeleteChen-ou