I immensely love your middle lines, especially Ls 3&4. I wonder if "Alone by the Pond" might enhance the thematic meaning of your poem.the frog of my mindjumpsinto the pond of the zeitgeistsplashlessas it swimsChen-ou
Thanks, Chen-ou. Actually,I was thinking of compadres sharing poetry. I love your response poem! Thank you, compadre.~Kay
I immensely love your middle lines, especially Ls 3&4.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if "Alone by the Pond" might enhance the thematic meaning of your poem.
the frog of my mind
jumps
into the pond of the zeitgeist
splashless
as it swims
Chen-ou
Thanks, Chen-ou. Actually,I was thinking of compadres sharing poetry. I love your response poem! Thank you, compadre.
ReplyDelete~Kay