Monday, August 15, 2011

At the Pond

reading
understanding
swaps of poesy-toesies
Basho's leapfrog topsy-turvies
intertwining tendrils
musing leafy
writing


2 comments:

  1. I immensely love your middle lines, especially Ls 3&4.

    I wonder if "Alone by the Pond" might enhance the thematic meaning of your poem.

    the frog of my mind
    jumps
    into the pond of the zeitgeist
    splashless
    as it swims

    Chen-ou

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  2. Thanks, Chen-ou. Actually,I was thinking of compadres sharing poetry. I love your response poem! Thank you, compadre.
    ~Kay

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