sometimes
Hallelujah
buzzes in the fly's mouth
"Beelzebub" drops from its tongue
instead
my tongue
sticks to the roof
of my mouth as I search
for the Hallah and uttered words
from G-d
Hallelujah
buzzes in the fly's mouth
"Beelzebub" drops from its tongue
instead
my tongue
sticks to the roof
of my mouth as I search
for the Hallah and uttered words
from G-d
Kay, WOW!! The poem, including the title, is replete with wordplay. And the biblical allusions add religio-aesthetic depth to the poem.
ReplyDeleteBut, I’m in two minds about “G-d.” I think this use of God’s name is chiefly employed the Jewish people. (Am I right?)
Chen-ou
Dear Chen-ou,
ReplyDeleteYour enthusiasm has made my day. I've had a terrible time writing anything lately. You are correct about the use of "G-d"--actually, I originally spelled the word out, but when I was talking to Matt about the use of Hallah and showing him the site that described the bread, somehow, it seemed appropriate. http://www.jewishrecipes.org/jewish-foods/challah.html
Take care,
Kay
Kay, thanks for the link.
ReplyDeleteI've learned something new.
By the way, have you seen a 2001 film, Trembling Before G-d? If not, you can watch it at
http://www.snagfilms.com/films/title/trembling_before_g_d/
Chen-ou
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ReplyDeleteSuch honest searching and lovely imagery here, Kay.
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