dust piles
the light eternal
shading
illuminating
remnants of neglect
antiquity
below
the light's bright
conceals it
above
stairwell's balcony
reveals it
spiraling down
ruminating
the shadows
the light eternal
shading
illuminating
remnants of neglect
antiquity
below
the light's bright
conceals it
above
stairwell's balcony
reveals it
spiraling down
ruminating
the shadows
Visual details and contrasts (light vs shadow; above vs below, conceal vs reveal...) make the poem evocatively effective.
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Thank you, Chen-ou. :o)
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