Saturday, April 2, 2011

Day 2

For Patrick

one year
shy, the quarter
a century watches
your life, which came to clumsy our
knowledge, and increase it
it is a gift
your life

2 comments:

  1. Kay, may I ask what is the difference between a mirrored cinquain and a mirror cinquain?

    Chen-ou

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  2. Well, Chen-ou, I just found out that my "cleverness" was not mine. I labeled my forms according to logic. I didn't know they were already in existence. Mirror, reverse... I'm sure my poetry doesn't fit the rules, since I "made it all up." LOL! I will study further.

    Thanks for your question! It revealed something new to me. ~Kay

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