Friday, February 25, 2011

the old one

handles
drawers with care;
opens a heart with lace--
presentation is everything--
but the scent works its way
best with eyes closed,
nose pressed

3 comments:

  1. Just beautiful, Kay.

    I'm impressed by the rhythm of the Mirrored Cinquain. I've never tried it myself but it has a remarkable music.

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  2. I second Brian. And the title is effectively utilized.

    I enjoy the read. Thanks for sharing.

    Chen-ou

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