Wednesday, October 27, 2010

lit rapture

jacko
your burning eyes
smell of something
warmer

4 comments:

  1. Instantly brought back the warm, mellow smell of a lit jack-o-lantern to me.

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  2. Can you believe, it's already Halloween? I have a craving for roasted pumpkin seeds...

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  3. Kay,

    I like the concluding word very much.


    Chen-ou

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  4. Thank you Chen-ou. I've enjoyed writing poetry for Halloween. School has taken away much of my time.

    ~Kay

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