Friday, September 17, 2010

Seafaring Vessel

salty airs
fire setting skies
quenchless waves
pouring sand

never empty

until I leave

2 comments:

  1. Powerful opening imagery.

    Stanza breaks make this poem emotionally effective. The breaks come naturally as the poem is formed.


    Chen-ou

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  2. I miss the ocean so much when I leave. Our visits are just too short. Thank you for your kind words.
    ~Kay

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