Saturday, September 18, 2010

Cold Affronts

last snow
clings to the mountain
a death grip
to reawaken
winter
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  1. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐September 19, 2010 at 5:30 AM

    This could be read as a well-crafted gogyohka.

    I like your word choice, "reawaken," which makes the poem emotionally effective.


    Chen-ou

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  2. Kay TracySeptember 19, 2010 at 1:42 PM

    Thank you Chen-ou. I still worry about labeling my poetry Haiku, Gogyohka, Tanka, etc... I am still needing to study the forms. It is an honor for you to call it such.

    ~Kay

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