Monday, September 27, 2010

Premonitions

wading in mist
waiting to be
gored
by lighthouse
horns

3 comments:

  1. This is really bloody. LOL!

    Structurally and thematically speaking, "being gored" is at the center of the poem.

    A good psychological poem.

    I like it.

    Chen-ou

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  2. Kay,

    Beautiful piece. Thank you.....pajamas

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  3. Thank you, dear friends.

    Pajamas, it is good to hear from you. I hope you are well.

    I am so honored to have friends like you two!

    ~Kay

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