This one had me holding my own breath.
I second Brian. And your use of alliteration (a lot of s's sounds) and wordplay is impressive.Chen-ou
Brian and Chen-ou:So glad you liked this one. I wrote of the experience with the fish, and then later read it with Matt. It was kind of suggestive. Oh, our fishy minds play games with us!~Kay
This one had me holding my own breath.
ReplyDeleteI second Brian.
ReplyDeleteAnd your use of alliteration (a lot of s's sounds) and wordplay is impressive.
Chen-ou
Brian and Chen-ou:
ReplyDeleteSo glad you liked this one. I wrote of the experience with the fish, and then later read it with Matt. It was kind of suggestive. Oh, our fishy minds play games with us!
~Kay