Monday, August 16, 2010

Fruit Blossoms

three girls
sit in the courtyard
comparing buds

5 comments:

  1. Another karmic link between us. I just posted a rose bud haiku. LOL!

    The concluding line is open to interpretation. I like it.

    Chen-ou

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  2. This is very intimate and sweet. One to send out, I think.

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  3. Thanks, guys. It is a new one for my project. I wrote a sequel to it for Middle school:

    Ripening Fruit:

    three girls
    sit at the poolside
    comparing buds

    LOL!!!! ~Kay

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  4. Beauty of semi transparency.

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  5. Hello 'me,'

    Thank you for visiting my site. I appreciate your comment. ~Kay

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