Saturday, March 10, 2012

Garage Sale: page 10

Dallas, Texas: The First Garage


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  1. I am continually surprised by how you can make a cinquain sound rhythmically different from poem to poem. And, of course, there is your signature playfulness with words putting a brave face on a child's poignant trial.

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    1. Thanks, Brian,

      I originally had the following second stanza in "ruminations" and removed it to make the poem have more "breathing room." I wish to return it now with a playful twist...

      Grandmother's park
      had an elephant
      s
      l
      i
      d
      e
      I'll never forget.

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    2. Well, the formatting on my slide did not take. Stupid Blogger nonsense...

      Imagine an angled word. LOL.

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