An effective "marriage" of love and intimacy, Kay. I'll say no more and attempt to distract Leonardo.
Yes, Brian, please do that. AND, can you please distract those who know how to count? I inadvertently broke a syllabic rule for cinquain. It'd be one thing if I meant to do it, but alas...I still like it the way it is. :)~Kay
Kay, ditto to what Brian said. I particularly like your opening and closing lines.Chen-ou
Chen-ou!It's nice to hear from you again. Thank you for your encouragement. :)Happy Valentine's Day to you.~Kay