Very tender. I especially like how you've made the single word line: "taken" do double-duty so effectively.
Kay, I like this poem, especially the concluding line and the title.Thanks for sharing.Chen-ou
Very tender. I especially like how you've made the single word line: "taken" do double-duty so effectively.
ReplyDeleteKay, I like this poem, especially the concluding line and the title.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
Chen-ou