dabsthe hushed rushHow much music you have packed into four words.And what an image they produce. Wonderful.
Brenda, thank you for reading here. I was impressed by your beautiful stone today. It will be so much fun to prance throughout the river and collect such gems.Best,Kay
Brian, as always, a delight to see your words.:) ~Kay
Kay, your use of the poetic word, eventide, successfully enhances the tone/mood of the poem.Nicely done.Chen-ou
Thank you so much for your kind praise, Chen-ou.~Kay