Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Small Stones: Day 4

eventide
the shore's reflection
dabs
the hushed rush

6 comments:

  1. dabs
    the hushed rush

    How much music you have packed into four words.
    And what an image they produce. Wonderful.

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  2. Brenda, thank you for reading here. I was impressed by your beautiful stone today. It will be so much fun to prance throughout the river and collect such gems.

    Best,
    Kay

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  3. Brian, as always, a delight to see your words.
    :) ~Kay

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  4. Kay, your use of the poetic word, eventide, successfully enhances the tone/mood of the poem.

    Nicely done.

    Chen-ou

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  5. Thank you so much for your kind praise, Chen-ou.
    ~Kay

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