I won't speak to how good this is, I think that goes without saying. I will remark on how beautifully crafted this is with its rhyme ("lance", "glanced") and brilliant "there" at the end of the 4th, the longest line sharp as an arrowhead: "THERE".
I'm so honored by your words. Thank you.~Kay
Beautiful and melodious, should definitely be read aloud. :)
Many thanks, Rebecca.