Friday, August 12, 2011

the call

whale song implores
sad-joy tonal rhythms
deep beneath
the surface

5 comments:

  1. Their tones do seem to capture more emotional complexity than our words can.

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  2. This poem asks the reader to go beneath surface appearance to grasp the heart of an experience.

    Nicely done.

    Chen-ou

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  3. Francis and Chen-ou,

    Your comments cheer me.

    ~Kay

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  4. An entire world of hidden, heartfelt vocalizations. A beautiful poem, Kay.

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