Thursday, April 7, 2011

Day 7

last year's unturned stones
take turns unworming the warm
unearthed, untilled soil

2 comments:

  1. Kay, I like the theme explored in the poem. However, as a non-native English speaker, it's quite a mouthful.

    Share with you one of my senryu on speaking English:

    ESL class:
    the Chinese have oral sex
    with some consonants

    Chen-ou

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  2. Good god, woman, that's a lotta "uns". What are you trying to do cast a spell? Oh yeah,I forgot...you are. ;)

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