Sunday, February 13, 2011

visitation rights

Neptune's breath
sandblasts my hair
filling it with souvenirs
for my pillow

4 comments:

  1. Sounds wonderful to me - both beach & poem.

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  2. It was wonderful, in all its fury!
    ~Kay

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  3. Kay, It's interesting to see that both in your poem (Neptune) and reply (fury), you allude to Roman mythology.

    Nicely done.

    Chen-ou

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