Sunday, September 26, 2010

The Still

bail set
clouds free to go
drink streams of consciousness
distilling blends of aquifer
moonshine
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  1. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐September 27, 2010 at 6:50 AM

    In terms of diction, this is a cinquain sharply different from those you've written so far.

    I like it.

    Chen-ou

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  2. Kay TracySeptember 27, 2010 at 10:36 PM

    What an interesting observation, Chen-ou. I will need to re-read the older work and compare.

    I'm glad you like it.

    Best,
    Kay

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