Friday, September 3, 2010

reaching out of the fog
my hand waits
my head can't
catch it

3 comments:

  1. Enigmatic. The non-specificity extends the poem's breadth.

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  2. A nice twist at the end of the poem.

    Chen-ou

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  3. Thanks, friends. I was so foggy, I couldn't even give it a title! LOL...

    Thank goodness it is supposed to cool off this weekend. Me, of all people, hoping for that!

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