This is excellent. Humorous simplicity at its best. Good show.
I'm so glad you like it. Grins.~Kay
The last line is powerful and your use of consonance is effective.Chen-ou
Thank you Chen-ou. When I first wrote it, I liked the rhyme. It was later that the idea of "turning inward" for meditation hit me. This was a fun one to write down. :o) ~Kay