Saturday, August 28, 2010

"Burning Ones"

seraphim'd trees shake rattles of venom'd fire

2 comments:

  1. This little poem says so much with few words.

    The images, visual and aural, are appealing.

    Nicely done.

    Chen-ou

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  2. Has a kind of archaic, ferocious quality, as if delivered by a Puritan preacher in ye old Massachusetts, all lathered into a frenzy regarding the "seraphim'd" & "venom'd".

    John Bunyan would be proud.

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