tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post7442675506722048267..comments2023-05-23T06:27:45.215-07:00Comments on Immersed in Word: The Forest through the TreesKay Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-12803602123633945012011-04-25T20:15:19.783-07:002011-04-25T20:15:19.783-07:00Chen-ou, it's so nice to hear from you. Thank ...Chen-ou, it's so nice to hear from you. Thank you for you kind words. I hope you are well!<br />~KayKay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-58841010211161675092011-04-25T07:35:43.957-07:002011-04-25T07:35:43.957-07:00Kay, the question raised in Brian's first repl...Kay, the question raised in Brian's first reply could be answered by the implication of the title, which is one of the thematic foci of the poem.<br /><br />Nicely done.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-59257638595617601262011-04-19T23:47:31.796-07:002011-04-19T23:47:31.796-07:00Thanks, friend.Thanks, friend.Kay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-76424489897193752122011-04-19T16:52:24.777-07:002011-04-19T16:52:24.777-07:00So beautiful...the revised lines perfect. Really j...So beautiful...the revised lines perfect. Really jaw-dropping work, Kay.Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12945352610103167449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-72324959348690866402011-04-19T10:02:44.722-07:002011-04-19T10:02:44.722-07:00So many thanks, Brian. I've missed your sharp ...So many thanks, Brian. I've missed your sharp eye. Maybe the spring and summer will release our muses. :0) Your work has been very good.<br /><br />And, I will revise this. I think you're spot on. Time to tone it down.<br /><br />Always,<br />KayKay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-37138559407048286152011-04-19T08:25:46.223-07:002011-04-19T08:25:46.223-07:00How often does one receive a poem from a fetus!? A...How often does one receive a poem from a fetus!? And one so accomplished at that?. Kind of supports the idea that poets are <i>born</i>, not taught.<br /><br />What exciting imagery! A bit heavy on the music there at the end. Not sure you want to go out with the blare of "trumpets". Your call.Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12945352610103167449noreply@blogger.com