tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post7422924630308193542..comments2023-05-23T06:27:45.215-07:00Comments on Immersed in Word: TimelessKay Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-28463799035599491492010-12-14T20:04:37.644-08:002010-12-14T20:04:37.644-08:00I didn't see the original but this is very mov...I didn't see the original but this is very moving. You have so obviously observed these things first-hand and with great attention. Stunned, an old woman writer once asked the 30 year-old Anne Sexton regarding her poem "Old", "How could you know?". I think with Sexton you could respond just as assuredly: "I know."Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12945352610103167449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-37497932304654713932010-12-14T08:39:16.548-08:002010-12-14T08:39:16.548-08:00Kay, the revision is much better. I like it very m...Kay, the revision is much better. I like it very much.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-65396117623314640312010-12-13T09:52:25.959-08:002010-12-13T09:52:25.959-08:00Thanks for stirring my mind, Chen-ou! The ebb and ...Thanks for stirring my mind, Chen-ou! The ebb and flow of critique is so good for writers.<br /><br />:o) ~KayKay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-66978920373493633632010-12-13T07:07:22.091-08:002010-12-13T07:07:22.091-08:00Kay,
the visual details in the upper verse is rea...Kay,<br /><br />the visual details in the upper verse is really impressive. However, I find the lower one a little telly. It leaves little room for the reader to ponder.<br /><br />Just a thought.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com