tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post6435779137836570479..comments2023-05-23T06:27:45.215-07:00Comments on Immersed in Word: Rest HomeKay Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-63394879512076468082010-12-15T15:21:09.804-08:002010-12-15T15:21:09.804-08:00Hello friends. Thank you for such kind words.
Che...Hello friends. Thank you for such kind words.<br /><br />Chen-ou: I have no idea why I italicized the word. I think it resounded in my head a certain way and it needed distinction. Many times I write first and think later. Sometimes it works better that way. :)<br /><br />Brian: So glad to have your comments again. Surprisingly, there is a window of writing time each day, and it seems to be very therapeutic. I hope to be back for a while.<br /><br />To all! Notice: Pajamas has been writing a steady stream this December. What a nice surprise for the holidays!!<br /><br />With love,<br />KayKay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-43601169126992504292010-12-14T19:57:54.410-08:002010-12-14T19:57:54.410-08:00I think the italicized "away" here works...I think the italicized "away" here works. It suggests a change in register and level, even from life to death. I find this a very sobering, frightening poem. Exceptional, Kay.Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12945352610103167449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-70742210469821995262010-12-14T08:44:43.095-08:002010-12-14T08:44:43.095-08:00Kay, I second Francis.
May I ask why you italiciz...Kay, I second Francis.<br /><br />May I ask why you italicized "away"? (maybe I missed something)<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-75236742445906895462010-12-13T12:16:06.879-08:002010-12-13T12:16:06.879-08:00It's nice to hear from you, Francis. Thank you...It's nice to hear from you, Francis. Thank you for your comment. It means a lot to me.<br />~KayKay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-9915776736636580672010-12-13T10:47:06.240-08:002010-12-13T10:47:06.240-08:00Such succinct an touching images... I can feel the...Such succinct an touching images... I can feel the ache in this.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.com