tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post6068910220266822534..comments2023-05-23T06:27:45.215-07:00Comments on Immersed in Word: Drink to Me Only...Kay Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-90274987713114649542011-12-05T12:53:39.909-08:002011-12-05T12:53:39.909-08:00Thank you, Chen-ou.Thank you, Chen-ou.Kay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-61148174287684466292011-12-04T13:10:43.381-08:002011-12-04T13:10:43.381-08:00Kay, as the poem proceeds, its language becomes mo...Kay, as the poem proceeds, its language becomes more and more dense.<br /><br />I like it.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-56324498966419384042011-12-03T11:58:27.686-08:002011-12-03T11:58:27.686-08:00Gabriele, you've just made my day. Many thanks...Gabriele, you've just made my day. Many thanks.<br />~KayKay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-69212024640741667792011-12-03T01:52:13.257-08:002011-12-03T01:52:13.257-08:00...what can I add to Brian's wonderful words........what can I add to Brian's wonderful words... but humble nodding....<br /><br /><br />gabrieleLadyArthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04572970868769129254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-74817308528584457552011-12-02T11:23:55.359-08:002011-12-02T11:23:55.359-08:00I've just curtsied like Shirley Temple.
Thank...I've just curtsied like Shirley Temple.<br /><br />Thank you, Sir Gracious! :)<br />~KayKay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-77017116198996082232011-12-02T07:26:42.095-08:002011-12-02T07:26:42.095-08:00It lives and drinks to live and nourish - yes!
...It lives and drinks to live and nourish - yes! <br /><br /><i>Imbibition</i>, now "there's a word to take your hat off to."<br /><br />Really like what you did with form here. I think the 4-4-8 is a great count for a short poem. I like the way a tetractys consolidates and finishes the poem with an intensely musical last line. This isn't a tetractys, of course, but similar in concept, the rhythm perfect. Like a little kid I shout: "Do it again, do it again!"Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12945352610103167449noreply@blogger.com